Magazine advert target audience feedback

From looking at our feedback a majority of the feedback says that they like the idea of the colour explosion and the chemical bottle. They also said that was the most creative part of the magazine advert. Also people from looking at the magazine ad found it very easy to figure out the genre of the album which is good as it means we are hitting our target audience of indie rock bands. As for improvments many didn't like the lack of text on the advert and the fact that the text is the same the whole way through. We plan on adding a different font for the reviews on the magazine advert just to feel a little more interesting.